Monday, 31 October 2011

Conflict of Thoughts






Her mind and she never look eye to eye
as the former always dominates the other
most of the times they pretend as the other one does not exist
and they play games in their own ways
At times they hardly pay any heed to the other
and sometimes they are best of friends…
A crack is tearing into her skin
but she cannot even feel the pain anymore
An open space from the past claws at her heart
...So steadily it creeps into her thoughts
She cannot even find her in this mess,
 until she sees herself in the mirror
Yet the mirror seems vulnerable to the truth
To see inside her she needs her eyes to borrow her mind
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7 comments:

  1. Parallel Government31 October 2011 at 10:15

    her pride is in her fertility....

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  2. Suman Doogar31 October 2011 at 13:22

    I did not understand your comment here Saurabh?

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  3. MayankS31 October 2011 at 23:23

    So Deep , loved it...

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  4. Suman Doogar31 October 2011 at 23:24

    Thanks Mayank

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  5. Rishi Gajbhiye2 September 2012 at 04:03

    Nice way to describe "self encounters", when mind mostly overpowers... :)

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  6. Suman Doogar2 September 2012 at 04:25

    Thank you for your feedback Rishi..I am sure it has happened to you too :)

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  7. Rishi Gajbhiye2 September 2012 at 05:05

    Suman - Yep...it keeps on happening to me even now...he he he...and then they too get popped up on my blog...he he he

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